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EDIT: EJ is being fixed up?

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EYELESS JACK'S STORY :

Hello, my name is Mitch. I am here to tell you about an experience I had. I don't know if it's paranormal, or what kind of stupid words people always use to describe supernatural phenomena, but after this thing came to see me, I now believe in this paranormal crap.

A week after I moved in with my brother Edwin, because I had to leave my house because of a foreclosure, I finished unpacking. Edwin liked the idea that I moved in with him, and so did I; Finally, we have not seen each other for 10 years. Soon after moving in, I fell asleep. After about a week I woke at 1 AM and heard rustling from outside. I suspected that it was a raccoon, so I hadn't pondered any further and went back to sleep. The next morning I told Edwin about it, and he agreed with me.
The next night, however, I heard my window opened. Followed by a loud bang, as if something entered my room. I jumped up and looked around in my room, but there was no sign of anything. The next morning, Edwin dropped his coffee cup when he saw me. I was confused until he handed me a small mirror. I had a big cut in my left cheek.
After we rushed to the hospital, my doctor told me that I was probably sleepwalking, but then he showed me something that ran a shiver down my back. He lifted my shirt to show me a sewn section where my kidneys are. I stared into his eyes, as they widened in fear. "You've somehow lost your left kidney in the previous night. We really do not know how this could've happen. I'm sorry for you, Mitch. "

The next night it happened. Around midnight, I woke up, and it offered me a really terrible sight. Face to face staring down at me, a creature with a black hoodie and dark blue mask with no nose and mouth on top of me. But what was most frightening was the fact that it had no eyes. Only empty, black sockets. In addition, there was some black substance dripping from the eye sockets of the creature. I grabbed the camera, which was right close next to me and took a picture. Then it jumped at the flash, and began trying to tear my chest, to get to my lungs. I pushed back at it, trying to keep the thing away, and eventually did. When I ran out of my room, I grabbed my wallet. I would need the money. I ran out of my brother's house out into the night. Finally I ended up in the woods that was close by to the house and stumbled over a rock.
I lost consciousness and woke up in the hospital. My doctor came into the room. It was the same as last time. "I have a good and bad news, Mitch." Said my doctor. "The good news is that you only have minor injuries and your parents will be coming to pick you up." I sighed in relief. "The bad news is that your brother was killed by ... some..thing... My sincere condolences... "

My parents brought me back to Edwin's house so I could get the rest of my stuff, which I did. Upon entering my room I was scared, but I remained calm. I took my camera and suddenly stopped as if rooted. In the hallway leading to my room, I could see Edwin's body.. and something small off to the side. I took the little thing and got back in the car of my parents without mentioning Edwin's body. I looked at the thing in which I took and I nearly threw up. It was my stolen, half-bitten kidney... which had coating of a thick, black substance... in my hand.

(c) NOT MINE IM NOT THE CREATOR, THIS IS: creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Use…

EDIT: I thought ej's story was being taken down. it was, but it possibly being fixed up. If it's gone for good, its here for people to enjoy~
Just keeping his story for easy access!!


EDIT: I was told that he isn't being taken off by a couple commenters X3
I was worried, i guess i hadn't looked far enough into it
Im hoping that the guy who made E.j will actually rewrite his story.. 

it upset me when i saw his creepypasta wiki page saying he'd left the fandom.. i just hope that its not for sure..
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The creator of EJ wanted the story taken down because the creator said it was embarrassing how bad it was.